123...lets go

[RONDOE]

did this for tha artist Kontac, a kids song that is going to be part of a national campaign for child fitness. sumthin different for me let me kno wut yall think? -100

 

[iaoish]

Looks cool, great job!
I think I would make the '123' a bit pop out more though, just as much as the 'let's go'.

 

[Reegz]

clean

 

[RONDOE]

^^^^^^^^thanx yall!

 

[LeBigBang]

nice work man, i'm likin it... but those objects at the bottom are sort of standing out a bit more than the title itself...

 

[C-4]

why is the baseball player's face blurred out?


somethin is throwing the color off, it doesnt mix overall, like the words are hella bold and bright lettering, and the kids are faded back a little bit, the background is kinda like muted colors


i like it, it's clean, i think it needs some fine tuning

 

[ComputerNerd]

dat golf club gotta go.....other than that....zesty...

 

[Nevasoba]

I agree with all the above criticism....just some tweekin and its good to go!

 

[RONDOE]

thnks for tha feed yall, i did another version with differwnt coloring, but this is the one they picked. @computernerd damn is the club that bad? that was my favorite part! lol

 

[kontac]

Right on for the feedback,the blurr face is because I did not get permission to use the baseball players image. The White House Ok'd the cover they were pumped about it so its all good song and video is gonna be everywhere in the next month or so. Not on the regular rap radar,but it will be everywhere regular rap music can't go. Right on Rondoe for your work

 

[thebrain]

looks professional. shouldn't their be an apostrophe in let's

 

[RONDOE]

yea you know i spell checked it and either way it didnt show as a mistake. kontac said they already approved it so i guess it wasn't a problem -good lookin out

 

[qwasian]

needs work, you need something crispy & clean for this type of situation, and this has the guy down the street created it, unprofessional look to it. nothing is lined up or balanced at all. it's pulling ya eyes all over the place.

 

[RONDOE]

^^^^^^with your designs....stop it

 

[antilabs]

the type on the featuring looks like you didn't put a lot of thought into it.

the title type is on hit. i like that glossy look.

 

[RONDOE]

^^^^ naw fam this is gonna be a national campaign so i didnt wanna use any commercial fonts n get sued lol rite on tho

 

[antilabs]

you could have used the same typeface you did use but in a better & cleaner treatment.