sex thoughts....

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

Sex thoughts... Me and you gurl are like a Pay-Per View exclusive//
I'm attractive to you, I aint gunna be abusive//
I mack all hoes, your sudusive, Names i juss stack 'em//
Hit you nice and slow, giving you uncontrolable orgasims//
I can raise the force, fuck harder, giving you to have back Spasums//
I want thongs to show, get freaky on my flows//
In the studio, thoughts are in your mind fa sho//
I can see it in your eyes, I won the jack pot and your my prize//
Biggz advise, prepare to try and handle my supplies//
Look out, you see the sunrise, correction its sunset//
Staring at your lips, asking why they wet//
Affection, your in my viens like an injection//
I want you, we need to do more, we got a connection//
I know you like my thug appeal//
Making you squeal, what you need from me?(pause) its a done deal//
When i am in the middle of something, your in my head as a distraction//
Your reaction towards biggz, you admit last nite was more then satisfaction//


This is off a track i am doin with this gurl on the hook.... Title is called Sex Thoughts


Give your opinions....

 

[All Hallowz Eve]

I liked it, give it a 7...

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

thanx....

 

[All Out HOGG]

'When i am in the middle of something, your in my head as a distraction//
Your reaction towards biggz, you admit last nite was more then satisfaction"

^^^Tight way to end it...

'Look out, you see the sunrise, correction its sunset//"

^^^This line cuaght my eyes aswell...However the line that followed wasn't the best...

Another thing that i noticed is that your expanding your vocab but at the same time your limiting it to only show through the very last word in ever line...My suggestion would be to attempt to mix the 'big words" more within the lines...

Good shit thou...

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

thank you smurf... i'm still young and learning dawg.... this verse aint final i might be switchin and addin words to it...

 

[WcMalice]

Tight shit homie......I'm feelin that.

 

[HotCarolinaBabe]

That was tight Biggz good work!!!

 

[Juan Million]

Affection, your in my viens like an injection//
I want you, we need to do more, we got a connection//

I think it would sound better if you replaced that line with somethin like...

"Affection, your in my viens like an injection//
Makin my body tingle, the reason I be errectin//
Perfection, I know you like my thug apeal//
Making you squeal, what you need from me?(pause) its a done deal// "

Other than that I think the rest is pretty damn good.

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

thanx juan i will take that into consideration.....

 

[Knucklez]

yeah like smurf.. other then that its good for a rough draft.. edit it and add some shit and i't'll be coo

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

thanx knuckles

 

[servnu151]

love that verse..........dont give up cuzzin! fuck it lets shine!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Mic B]

Nice biggz, But Future of tha bay is gonna have some more heat. lol. that verse was tight foo keep it cracking. 1

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

future of the bay will be a hit!!!!!

Biggz feat. Tim C and Mic B

HOT!!!!!!!

 

[Mic B]

Fuck ya!!!

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

nice sig you got ARSEN..... You need anythang from BIGGZ. you know i'm down....


and MIC-B what about disarray?????? lol

 

[MiZnKoNsPiQuOz]

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NOW I WANT YOU BIGGZ..I DIDNT KNO U HAD IT LIKE THAT...LOL JP..GOOD SHIT THO LIL PA!~209~

 

[MiZnKoNsPiQuOz]

NOW I WANT YOU BIGGZ..I DIDNT KNO U HAD IT LIKE THAT...LOL JP..GOOD SHIT THO LIL PA!~209~

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

damn jade i want me too.... haha naw wats up tho boo... how ya been??

 

[MiZnKoNsPiQuOz]

I BEEN COOH..LOOKIN FOR A MORE STEADY JOB..IM ON MY OWN IN 5 MONTHS!!I CANT WAIT=0)HOWS THA LIFE OF "BIGGZ" GOING?~209~