Round One: Umbravo Vs. Ambition209

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FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

Sicc OG
#1
Apr 25, 2002
9,595
5
38
#1
Verses due by midnight on Saturday, June 30th, WEST COAST time.
12:01 = NO SHOW
Voting will begin when both verses are submitted, and will end on Monday, July 2nd at 4PM WEST COAST time.
The person with the most votes wins, obviously.
5-0 = Automatic KO
16 bars each (1 bar = 1 line)
One verse a piece
Questionable votes must be explained.
NO DICKRIDING.

Do not post in this thread until both verses are submitted. Unnecessary posts will be deleted.

Good luck to both contestants.
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

Sicc OG
#2
Mar 26, 2005
1,485
1
38
36
www.geocities.com
#2
your the ONLY PUSSY AROUND, the lonely bitch-inside-a-cypher/
you need votes? HIT EM UP, he has AMBITIONS-AS-A-RIDAH/
i'm piecing-my-raps-sick to beat-in-ya-fabric/
get beat so bad, YOU GON TAKE TWO L'S, but i don't mean-a-contraction/ (you'll)
ya bleedin-is-tragic, cuz i kicked ya teeth-to-ya-adams/
you'll TAKE AN L, like that group when lisas jeep-did-a-backspin/
ill pull ya beech-wit-my-accent and dig deep-with-my-passion/
next, it wont be cumshots by your eye when you SEE-MEN-THATS-PASSING/
i'm a beast-and-a-savage, a geek-kid-assassin/
when i reach-all-your-fag-friends, they'll be speakin-in-past-tense/
your receivin-the-shaft-bitch, no hope-for-the-kid/
i'll OPEN-HIS-WIG FOR BEING SWEET like halloween-with-no-bag-bitch/
lee, why didn't you just let me get beto-on-the-rematch/
i'm hungry at the table, sorta like fatal, cuz i BEAT-HOS-WHEN-I-SEE-SCRAPS/
slice a peehole-in-this-geeks-cap, im monstrous-dude/
bitch slappin competition, warming my palm-for-round-two/

No Need To Respond.
 
T

TROLL

Sicc OG
#5
Aug 8, 2003
5,360
22
0
43
#5
Aw.. wheres the ambition??.... ambition. lol

ovarbmu said:
lee, why didn't you just let me get beto-on-the-rematch/
i'm hungry at the table, sorta like fatal, cuz i BEAT-HOS-WHEN-I-SEE-SCRAPS/
slice a peehole-in-this-geeks-cap, im monstrous-dude/
bitch slappin competition, warming my palm-for-round-two/
Click to expand...
haha like that
 
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Ambition209

Sicc OG
#7
Feb 15, 2003
1,216
297
0
42
#7
man fuck that shit.... i didnt even realize this shit had started whats up nobody can send a pm or something... oh well i guess its my bad... i rarely ever check out the flows forum and forgot that i had signed up... damn for real....... anyway that was a pretty solid verse i would have had to write something good to match it or beat but I'm confident I could have....... if i have time then i will just for prides sake but right now I gotta roll out...... damn tho im disappointed i was lookin forward to this shit.......... good verse tho and good luck in round 2 fuck it......... i'm not really a battle writer/rapper i just write real shit anyway....... but i could rip heads off if i want......... peace
 
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Ambition209

Sicc OG
#9
Feb 15, 2003
1,216
297
0
42
#9
Had no chance to spit.. to advance in this.. felt it was kinda unjust,
still I'm inclined to drop rhymes.. shockin the minds of these dumb fucks,
see me in person.. i aint gotta make the gun bust,
i'll hit you off with some knum chucks,
in the middle of the ruckus I'm duckin out untouched,
like a homeless man bein hurried up.. you gettin BUM-RUSHED,
I'll take you on that long ride.. don't tempt me fool,
you'd rather do a swan dive.. into a empty pool,
if I hit ya it'll hurt like hell,
when I'm thru wit ya crew.. Im'a have more battery cases than duracel,
i come to florida and hit ya block like a hurricane,
ambition.. ambition.. you say it too... now everyone here has heard my name,
I won't front and say your verse was lame,
yeah ur rhymes were kinda cute,
actin hard..but bitch paris hiltons done more time than you,
I was a no show.. it went to your benifit..
cuz I was in some pussy last night.. but like redrum u never been in a bitch,
well enough of this... no point in tryin to clown you,
you got lucky i was busy... good luck in round two.......


i just slapped that together real quick cuz i didnt wanna go out like that........ but yeah i woulda put more thought and personals into this shit if i knew it counted but whatever........ lets see some votes for the fuck of it........
 
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Ambition209

Sicc OG
#15
Feb 15, 2003
1,216
297
0
42
#15
no respect for my verse huh??? well yeah im down for a rematch hope you go on to win this so i could show off my talent.. but i got real skills an therapy not just tryin to rhyme some nonsense ass words... ya rhyme scheme is good but work on meanin what u say
 
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