I CAN SEE WHERE YOU WERE gOIN' WITH THIS. ACTUAL SUBJECT LOOKS LIKE YOU WERE TRYIN' TO DRAW A MASTERPIECE, BUT THE CONTRAST AND LIgHTIN' ON THE BAKgROUND DON'T LOOK AS SHARP TO COMPLIMENT THE SUBJECT. AND THEN THE FONTS DON'T DO IT JUSTICE. ON THE BOTTOM ONES, I KNOW THE BLAK SEEMS TOO PLAIN AND OPAQUE. THE TOP ONES, THEY JUST THERE IN gREY. ALSO, BRINg MORE OF YOUR BORDER OUT. IF YOU TWEAK IT, YOU gOT A MARKETABLE PRODUCT.