Paris - Its War

[San Juan]

I always liked paris and wanted to do something of him and i came up with this. Im sure you all know who he is, hes a great political rapper and one of my fav. rappers of all time.

So now you askin why my records always come the same
Keep it real, ain’t no fillers, motherfuck a blingin’
Mine eyes seen the gory of the coming of the beast
So every story every word I’m sayin’ “Fuck Peace” - Paris

thats one of myfav. lines from him. check out the cd cover and tell me what you think.

 

[San Juan]

Here y ago i made this one to.


give me some feedback does it suck or good. Im not using them for anything but practice but you guys here are professionals so anything will help

thanx

aww damn i just realized my head looks fucking longer then shit lol

 

[C-DUBB]

nice work boss..... p m me with some info on quotes , deals , et...

 

[Sven]

nice work boss..... p m me with some info on quotes , deals , et...

Hey C_DUBB check ya PMs

Juan. The Paris one is dope, I'n not really feelin the 2nd one. Looks like u just put some layers on the bg...

 

[San Juan]

yea thats all i did. whenever i practice for myself i never do nothin fancy cuz its of me lol. I just play around.

I aint no rapper so no need to, every now and then i make a song for the fun of it, but if i barely have a future in graphics to people, then i would hate for them to hear me rap lmao

 

[Jaguar]

tight shit! keep'em comin!

 

[DubbC415]

both of em are pretty cleen...only thing im not feelin is the "its war" part on the bottom.

 

[SPORADIC]

Yo, that Paric looks nice...

 

[Josh]

that p-dog one is real fucking hot, nice job 4 real

peace

josh

 

[J Pusha]

I'm sorry, i was looking for the art forum.... I must of stumbled onto the "Undeserving Nutt-Rider Forum."

San Juan - keep doing your thang... Everyone Else - give honest feedback or nothing at all.

 

[ToXzide]

I've actually been lookin at this alot when my account wasn't activated , That shit is really hot man. The blending is reaaal nice and good choice of text.

 

[SiccMadeLoc]

IU'm feelin that background goin on in the background of the paris cover, sicc shit, aint really feelin the text, it dont match the color scheme, id make it a dark yellowish/orangish color, like the bg, itll stand out more, the second one, it seems that there could be more work done, but its str8t.

 

[San Juan]

Lol more work done? Yes absolutely. Cuz after likr 7 hours i was looking at it and noticed that hand and was like wtf did i do? So I really fucked it up there by not noticing. lol.

Thanx for all your feedback

 

[D-Skrilla]

The Paris one is pretty coo. Not feelin tha 2nd one.

 

[San Juan]

oh and heres a lil logo i made. I dont care if it dont look clean its just for a crappy sig lol and i also put it on cds so i wont show people and they say they will think about using it and then use it and not pay me (happened 2 times) so i put it on th ebottum

 

[Starscream]

The Paris cover is ok. But, I think the Parental Advisory logo is too big, and it's placed a little to high up on the cover. I can see why, cuz you got the "It's war" text where the logo should be, and there seems to be something behind the logo as well.
You could work a bit more with the texts, cuz they look kinda half-done, if ya know what I'm saying.
The picture is a bit too dark for my liking, you should lighten it up a bit, but not too much.
Like the background though. With a little more work, this could be dope!

 

[Kavie]

i like tha Paris cover...

heard of him but never heard any of his shit...might have to chck it out...