my new song (youtube video)

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May 15, 2003
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since the song i originally posted (one day ill bounce back) needs to be re-recorded, i thought i'd post up this one i did with my friend Mr. Quik-C aka Carte Blanche, we wrote it last year but the subjects are still relevent, you can also check out the other song too even though its just a rough draft, let me know what you think...





let me know what you think...

 
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thanks man, i actually am gonna re-record it cause i know i can do better, i wrote the whole thing, made the whole beat, recorded it, mastered it, and put it up on youtube all just last night, so i didnt have it memorized or anything, but im gonna practice it for a month and then re-record it
 

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i checked it, not bad. something seems missing though. its in the vocals. i'm no rapper, just a listener so my critique doesnt hold much weaight but something seems amis. maybe a double to streantghn the vocals?
 
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hmmm... its already doubled, honestly i probably just need to learn new mastering techniques or something to make the vocals more dynamic, but aslong as its listenable

maybe needs more emphisis, but im too lazy to go back and re-do that one hahaha