my new song (youtube video)

[italianstallion]

since the song i originally posted (one day ill bounce back) needs to be re-recorded, i thought i'd post up this one i did with my friend Mr. Quik-C aka Carte Blanche, we wrote it last year but the subjects are still relevent, you can also check out the other song too even though its just a rough draft, let me know what you think...





let me know what you think...

 

[frankz mafia]

what was that?

 

[italianstallion]

thanks, im probably gonna re-record it once i got the verses memorized, cause even i recognize that it sounds a little choppy

 

[bay2mi]

thanks, im probably gonna re-record it once i got the verses memorized, cause even i recognize that it sounds a little choppy

lol at choppy... no! your voice does NOT work for making music.

 

[italianstallion]

then dont listen, but im making it regardless

 

[westbanklover]

I LIKE IT .....KEEP IT ITALIAN.......LOL

 

[DJ Abbico]

No one would EVER do this song...& that's why I like it so much. Polish it & put it back up, I wanna hear the finished product.

 

[italianstallion]

thanks man, i actually am gonna re-record it cause i know i can do better, i wrote the whole thing, made the whole beat, recorded it, mastered it, and put it up on youtube all just last night, so i didnt have it memorized or anything, but im gonna practice it for a month and then re-record it

 

[MoonChild]

keep at it mayn' sounds good, jus delivery for sure, feelin the lyrics.

 

[ROB RIZE]

zzzzzzzzzz...........wtf r u talkin bout?

 

[fillyacup]

beat is clean. work on your delivery, make it YOU

 

[fillyacup]

maybe add a little bit of faster spits on it

 

[italianstallion]

maybe add a little bit of faster spits on it

thanks man, i was kinda planing on just having it be a slower paced song, but maybe someday ill do a remix which is faster

 

[fillyacup]

not like the whole song, but some parts could use a little sacromento chopp style

 

[italianstallion]

ohh i gotcha, ill work on it, check the song in my signature and let me know if your feeling my delivery in that one (first verse)

 

[fillyacup]

just an pinion.


i turnd sigs off, let me see

 

[italianstallion]

check out more here, my friends are dope...
www.myspace.com/dansmusic

 

[fillyacup]

i checked it, not bad. something seems missing though. its in the vocals. i'm no rapper, just a listener so my critique doesnt hold much weaight but something seems amis. maybe a double to streantghn the vocals?

 

[italianstallion]

hmmm... its already doubled, honestly i probably just need to learn new mastering techniques or something to make the vocals more dynamic, but aslong as its listenable

maybe needs more emphisis, but im too lazy to go back and re-do that one hahaha

 

[fillyacup]

thats it. some of it sounded forced, like no enthusiasm. add some, dare i say, swag to the shit!