Can I get some feedback please?

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Feb 16, 2006
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If you have a few minutes to spare, check out my music. This might be the wrong place to make this thread, but fuck it, I doubt any of the other sections get nearly as many views.

http://www.myspace.com/therussian25

If you don't like the first song that you listen to, check out the others, there might be at least one you like. Since everyone here is a rap "expert", I'm looking for opinions to see what I can do to make my music better. I haven't been doing it for too long, right now I'm just trying to get better at it, and if that happens I might put some money into it. Right now, I'm using no proffessional equipment at all (which reflects in the quality of the sound), therefore I'd like some feedback in other areas of the music which include:

Lyrics/Subject Matter
Beat Selection
Hooks
Flow
The way the songs are put together
Anything else you think could help me

If you have nothing to say that could help imrove my music, at least say what song you were feeling the most.


More of my music: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=633222

And Check out my blog @ http://leftcoast415.blogspot.com for Bay Area Hip Hop News, Audio, Video and more.

Thank You.