whutup help me out wit this shit

[LiLPsychO]

see im tryin to be exclamitory putin my shit out threw this labratory
and if i keep it up maybe youll see me in the rap directory/
but i cant get caught up with these fool talkin shit/ as a take this fuccin rip
i sit bacc and think about fame dats comin quick/
my vocab must be increasin and if it aint i be peacin
and after that i'll know what goes down in this at least an i be out..

 

[All Hallowz Eve]

Didn't like the scheme cuz, seemed like the subject jumped around too much in the few lines that you had. To be honest, I didn't like it...